Activity 20 Conclusion and Recommendations

You can compare your answers here:

Conclusion

Recommendations

Activity 26 Page 39

Work with a partner.

Improve the letter on page 38. Make it more customer centred.

First draft your letter in your books.

Then log into this blog and post it as a 'new post'.

Then look at what other students have posted. Comment on their work

Online Proficiency Materials

These activities will help you to improve your writing:

1. How to write memos http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/CILL/eiw/memos.htm

2. Formality in memos: http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/CILL/eiw/memo-formality.htm

3. Use of Headings: http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/CILL/eiw/memoheadings.htm

4. Staff or staffs? http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/CILL/exercises/staff.htm

5. Problem Words: http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/CILL/eiw/problemwords.htm

You can spend time at home doing them.

Welcome to the EIW for CBS Blog

The purpose of this blog is to help you all with your writing.

We will use it in some lessons for writing activities.

Bu using it, you will easily be able to see other students work.

By comparing your work to others you will improve your writing.

You can also comment on other student's work telling them what is good, and what can be improved.

To post on the blog, use the 'username' and password that Adam has given you.